I love the insights into the world you are building. Well done. I love the way you are answering questions and posing seeds for stories, character arcs, and conflicts.
Thank you for reading. As I re-read it I could tell I needed to spend more time editing. lol. But I feel good about how I differentiated the three foreign ancestries.
I love the insights into the world you are building. Well done. I love the way you are answering questions and posing seeds for stories, character arcs, and conflicts.
Thank you for reading. As I re-read it I could tell I needed to spend more time editing. lol. But I feel good about how I differentiated the three foreign ancestries.